Friday, March 31, 2017

Turn it in

Does anyone know how to upload the questions onto turn it in from a phone if it's on google docs

Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Quick Citation Question

Hey guys, does anyone know if we have to source the pictures we use in the MVA?

Monday, March 27, 2017

Help with Endnotes?

Does anyone know how to format the end notes section? I have a few questions about them. Do we need footnotes in the pieces themselves with a corresponding end note? And where do we put them?As in do we do each end note after the genre it is explaining, or do they all go together in an "End Notes" section of the paper? And if they all go together, are they before or after the works cited page? I don't know the proper way to do these, and the instructions I have concerning end notes seem kind of vague, or they only describe what they are and not how to format them.

Sunday, March 26, 2017

AF: TURNITIN.COM

Hi, Kids!

It's important that we create your accounts for Turnitin.com so you can submit your Rationale later this week.

This is our class ID:  13563972.

Get yourself signed up, will you please??

Friday, March 17, 2017

AF: MVA Evaluation -- last year's

I'm revising this for you, but mostly I'm reworking the format.  The content is good; you can rely on these bullet points.

Framing the MVA
  • The writer includes a “Dear Reader” Letter to describe and introduce the work to a reader who has never read an MVA before
  • The writer includes End Notes to explain how the pieces were written, and to direct readers to the appropriate citation for the creative pieces
  • The writer includes a Works Cited page to fully document sources
  • The Rationale, turned in separately, is fully developed and satisfying
Audience Awareness, Development of Thesis and Use of Supporting Evidence
  • The writer significantly answers his/her problematical question through the use of genre(s)
  • The writer narrows, defines, and clarifies the central purpose/question for this project
  • The writer’s main point/thesis aims at the intended audience and is clear after reading the entire project, although it may not be explicitly stated
  • The writer constructs an effective argument with credible appeals to logos, ethos and pathos
  • By the end of the paper the reader sees that the writer has presented an argument
Research
  • The project reflects serious, in-depth research
  • The writer appropriately uses 6-8 sources
  • The writer avoids plagiarism and appropriately documents and explains sources used
Genre-writing
  • The writer has written competently and thoroughly in the chosen genres and voices
  • The genres are appropriate for the audience and purpose of the project
  • The  writer has included at least six genres
Organization/Unity
  • The project is clearly and effectively organized and forms a unified whole
  • The writer effectively utilizes a repetend to unify and connect the paper
  • The sequence of genres makes sense and meets the needs of the reader
Surface Errors

  • The paper has few editing or proofreading errors
  • The writer’s usage, grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation are clear and correct or appropriate when a specific genre calls for non-standard usage

AF: The MVA Rationale

The Rationale is turned in separately from your actual MVA, but it IS a part of your overall word count.  Do a good job with this assignment!


The Rationale for the Multivoiced Argument Project

Please answer the following questions and submit it to Turnitin.com by midnight on March 30, 2017.   This part of the assignment is worth 30 points, or 15% of the entire project; I am looking for thoughtful, complete answers.  Please type your paper, number your answers, and answer as fully as possible.

1.    What is your research and persuasive goal?

2.    Who is your audience for this project?  Describe in detail.

3.    What do you most want readers to see in your project?  How did you get this “thesis” across?

4.    How did you choose your genres and why are they appropriate for your audience and persuasive goal?

5.    How do the genres work together to form a unified whole? How did you determine what types of transitions to use between sections of your paper and what types of strategies did you use to achieve unity and clarity?

6.    How did you use your researched sources in your pieces?  How does a reader know how you used your research?

7.    Where did you take the most risks?

8.    What do you like best about your paper?

9.    What would you improve if you would have had more time?

10. Offer advice to new readers of multivoiced texts.  How might they best make sense of your project?  Offer advice on how to enter the text, how to move through the text, and how to come out on the other side with understanding.  (This is the main content of your Dear Reader Letter.)

11. Compare this paper in style and approach to other research projects you have tackled in the past.  Did multigenre style shape how you see yourself as an arguer?

12. What am I not seeing in this paper?  What did you not include?  What is behind the scenes?  Did you enjoy writing this paper?  Did you struggle with procrastination?  Did you write something that you were not able to use?

13. What advice can you offer next year’s writers of this assignment?

14. What advice can you offer me as a teacher of multivoice argument?  May I keep your paper?

Tuesday, March 14, 2017

MVA Help

As I was struggling to do the MVA, I googled for some help and I found this presentation that gives different types of genres that are very helpful. It also gives other advice for the paper in general.
Hope it helps!
http://photos.state.gov/libraries/india/13974/libpdfs/TheMultigenreResearchpaper.pdf

Monday, March 13, 2017

AF: Alfred Green, and vocab due date

OK, this is what I said and what I want:

I want the essay typed, and double spaced.
You should have an introduction that we wrote in class.  Feel free to revise.
Please write out two more paragraphs of analysis in your notebook.  Write carefully.  Look closely.
Then type it all up, and finish:  another paragraph of analysis, and a conclusion.

All told, introduction, 3 paragraphs of analysis, and a conclusion -- 5 paragraphs.

Features:
Please include one sentence that has 2 or more independent clauses, correctly joined with a semi-colon.
Please include one very short sentence -- 3 to 4 words max.  Use this sentence for emphasis.

To repeat:  a typed, double-spaced 5-paragraph essay, featuring an introduction that sets up the context, 3 paragraphs analyzing Green's persuasive moves, and a conclusion.  One compound sentence featuring the correct use of the semi-colon, and one short sentence of 3 to 4 words for emphasis.

We're working on this in class tomorrow, so bring your highlighters.

Also, vocab quiz and vocab notebook check on MARCH 23, one week from Thursday.




Thursday, March 2, 2017

AF: Question Analysis -- due Tuesday

from Reading Rhetorically


DUE TUESDAY, March 7 Copy/Paste these questions into a Google Doc, and answer. Please print so that I may keep your thinking handy in my MVA 2017 Folder.

Prompts for Question Analysis

  1. What question do you hope to investigate -- and answer -- in this paper?
  2. What makes this question worth pursuing -- to you and others?
  3. What kind of expert would be able to provide good answers or the current best thinking about possible answers?
  4. Where do you expect to find particularly good information about the matter?
  5. How recent must materials be to be relevant? What factors might make information outdated?
  6. What individuals or interest groups have a major stake in answering your question in a particular way?
  7. What kind of bias do you need to be especially alert for on this particular question?
  8. What words or phrases might be useful for some initial searching?  
(Bean, Chappell, and Gillam 2011, 108)